Points Points Earned
Sentences are consistently grammatical. Major sentence‐level errors including fragments, run‐ ons, and comma splices are avoided.
Sentences are graceful, i.e., they can be read aloud without awkwardness, awkward pauses, or running out of breath.
Language is rich, precise, and vivid.
Grammar and Mechanics
Spelling is proficient. Spellcheck has been used to avoid egregious errors.
Grammar and mechanics are sound, including mastery of the following key elements: subject‐ verb agreement; verb form; appropriate punctuation and capitalization; apostrophe use; appropriate word use.
There are no extra words and there are not missing words.
Organization and Format
Organization and structure are clear and easy to follow. Writing shows clear purpose and orderly transitions from beginning to end. Sentences consistently establish this organization and flow rather than interrupt it.
Format meets APA guidelines and Bluebook rules as appropriate, including use of title pages. There is no playful experimentation with fancy fonts.
It is written for the appropriate audience.
Writing shows both internal citations in the body of the text as well as a proper list of references at the end of the paper, following APA or Bluebook format.
Citations appear consistently where
needed, whether following quoted or paraphrased material in the text.
Note: In papers requiring secondary sources, failure to provide any citation does not result in a deduction of 10% from the paper, but will result in a failed paper and a plagiarism investigation.
Based on the Unit 7 Assignment : PART I:
Did CARDWARE have genuine BFOQ’s (Bonafide Occupational Job Qualifications) in its ad?
Has the student reviewed and incorporated the company’s slogan as given in the above facts?
Has the student discussed both Petunia’s point of view as well as CARDWARE’s position and defenses?
Has the student legal authority to support your position as well.
If Petunia brings a law suit based on negligence against CARDWARE and “The Sporty One,” will CARDWARE be responsible for Noah’s behavior? Under what theory. (Note, student should discuss respondeat superior)
What defenses might CARDWARE assert?
If Hetty Black’s estate claims that CARDWARE should be responsible for Hetty’s death, will it?
What defenses might CARDWARE utilize?
Total: 100%  [ ] Points
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